Currently reading: Save the Cat Writes a Novel

“Editing sucks,” I said everyday for the past three months.

I wrote “White Hell” for my graduate thesis. Unfortunately, my thesis adviser was not invested in my success, so I floundered with the final execution. In my final weeks, I got the opportunity to work with Diana Pharaoh Francis, which changed the direction of the novel in one conversation.

Discovering a story or developing a character aren’t a problem for me. My writing struggle is in the outline and editing. How do I ramp up the tension?

Using a tool like The Hero’s Journey or Save the Cat Writes a Novel has been incredibly useful. But I view it as an editing tool.

Save the Cat helps provide the framework around which I tell a story, like a the frame of house. I’ve started working on a new novel and struggled within the first 5k words. I turned to this book for some guidance on building my hero.

This $13 Kindle book has been worth more than most of my MFA classes.

#savethecat #writertool #writerlife #editingsucks #nanowrimofail #mfagrad

Birthday: 42

A common mistake that people make when trying to design something completely foolproof is to underestimate the ingenuity of complete fools,” Douglas Adams, “Hitchhicker’s Guide to the Galaxy

Yesterday I became the answer to the Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything. I turned 42. What better way to celebrate than to pick up some classic literature?

#42 #hgttg #dontpanic #rememberyourtowel

Magic Book

“Books are a uniquely portable magic.” Stephen KingOn Writing: A Memoir of the Craft

For an author, the magic book is the one that inspires a lifetime of toil over the page, endless hours scratching in a journal, and each commute constructing complicated story lines.

Chelsey and the Green-Haired Kid” by Carol Gorman was my magic book.

It all started in Mrs. McDonald’s sixth grade English class at McKinley Middle School in Cedar Rapids, Iowa too many years ago. I loved Mrs. McDonald and she valued books and writers above all. So those became my values.

We read Gorman’s book then the author came to visit our class. I was smitten. Gorman talked about the book and her life and her husband, Ed Gorman. Shortly after the author’s visit to our class, I started devouring horror novels by the box-full. Mom would pick up books by Dean Koontz, Robin Cook, Stephen King, and more at garage sales or in the grocery check-out lines.

Most of my reading life was suddenly inhabited by aliens, supernatural forces, demented dogs, evil doctors and maniacal hitmen. After a few years, I began doodling and outlining my own stories. It became an addiction, an obsession.

Coffeehouse cliche

I always found the image of a writer toiling over words in a coffee shop to be somewhat romantic, even if it is a cliche.

Last night as the deadline to submit my final draft for Kindle pre-order ticked away, I sequestered myself in a small Starbucks to finish the last ten chapters. Being at home, I’m easily distracted by the cat or finishing the bag of Doritos in the pantry. My only diversion from my editing was the college age girl, obviously hot for teacher, and her tutor working on geometry.

Might have to give it a go more often. Can’t let the Doritos win. If only their coffee was better.

Last day of Editing

I added an extension to Google Chrome that audibly reads text from any document or website. As my deadline approaches at midnight tonight, I’m listening to White Hell for the final round of edits.

Listening not only goes faster, but also allows me to focus on the poetry: missed words, poor phrasing and pacing. Not something I can accomplish with a spell checker or grammar wizard.

I find comfort that I laugh at some of the scenes and flinch at others. I wrote the words, but they still surprise me.

Wish me luck as we tick toward midnight.

Ready for Winter

I don’t love cold weather, but I hate summer. I’m allergic to all things Iowa and spending time outdoors in the summer is miserable.

Count the Bald Eagles

I do miss going to the river and seeing dozens of Bald Eagles. The snow blocks out all the extraneous noise and all I hear through my Elmer Fudd hat is the dam churning, squirrels squawking and eagles chattering.

Started working on a new piece set in the Colorado high country during winter. My second novel-length project in which weather acts as a character. In White Hell, the winter storm acts almost as a villain, aiding the antagonist and creating another obstacle for the protagonist. In the latest piece, the weather and freezing temperatures are the catalyst for the inciting incident.

Love Scenes

“Let’s get it on” Marvin Gaye

Sex is the natural world is weird and sometimes violent. We love to cling to the delusion that human procreation is magical or ordained, but it’s awkward at best. I’ve written a few love scenes that were tender and mythical, but utter bullshit.. I now resolve to write bumbling and artless love scenes.

Currently Watching: Free Solo

Happy Disney Plus Day! After a couple of Pixar shorts, I settled on the National Geographic film “Free Solo.” It is phenomenal.

I’ve never climbed other than messing around on a climbing wall. I’ve hung out with climbers and known a few Dirtbags during my time in Colorado. But I must confess that climbing and its culture fascinates me. I’ve read Jon Krakauer, some of them several times. If I see a climbing movie, I’m in.

I think it is the theme of Man vs. Nature as well as Man vs. Man that enthralls me. The climber must overcome his own mental road blocks before ever touching the mountain. It is a narrative thread I want to follow.

What do you read that’s out of character?

Perfect Autumn

No matter where I’ve lived, autumn days can be counted on one hand. The air is brisk with a cold bite that reaches under your favorite jacket and tickles paling skin. The sun slants across the atmosphere casting everything golden as plants cling to the last moments of life and animals scurry for warmer burrows.

That magical moment when the light is perfect.

So far this year, I’ve seen three autumn days. What’s your favorite season?

Currently Reading

I’m generally not a fan of writing books. There’s a whole industry devoted to aiding writers and scores of books about every minuscule aspect of writing. Most of them are nothing more than common sense packaged and marketed as a secret or revolutionary new method. Shenanigans.

I, however, have found this book to be very helpful in creating or clarifying character motivation and development. In my NaNoWriMo novel, I was struggling with one of my characters. Linus was flat and stereotypical. I really needed him to be something special to help carry the story forward. This book helped me find his motivation and make him whole.

The author’s also offer other “Thesaurus” books for emotions, negative or positive traits, urban or rural settings. I own most of them on Kindle, but cannot yet speak to their efficacy. What I really needed for the last book was a weather thesaurus to help describe the climate changes since I used weather much like a character rather than a function of setting. Maybe that’s the book I’ll write to enter the “train the writer” marketplace.